Danzidell

Well, I've uploaded two songs, am about to remake one of the older ones with avinashv, so that will be fun--just testing this out and all that! :P

Haha, so I have 3 versions of pretty much the same song with just variations in the vocals...but anywho, I would really appreciate some help on the instrumental side so I can upload an even better version! I think the vocals have improved (its a deeper tone for sure), but I really could use help on the instrumental side of things. Hope all is well, and I hope you guys aren't too bugged by the prospect of listening to a song 3 times. Thanks guys!

-Dan

I'm really tired of having no new material--I tried to remake an older song of mine with Denis, couldn't get it the way I wanted--but I really just want to work on a completely new song--anyone interested? I really want band sound behind me--not just an acoustic guitar--anywho--let me know!

-Dan

A few of the lines in the middle of the song I feel were forced--and I was trying to come up with a few replacements, but could not--any ideas? I'll mark the lines with a *. And just for reference, here is the recorded song--http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/5149.html

Thanks!



Used to be so alone

Didn't know which way was home

Always knew I had faith in side

But never knew the day I couldn't hide



'Cus in the land of golden dreams

Things aren't always the way they seem

We live our life for our gain

Never letting anyone-in our lane

In the land of golden dreams



Whether it rains or snows

There are highs and lows

Things aren't always meant to be

Can't be completely free

But we can try

Some will live and some will die


'Cus in the land of golden dreams

Things aren't always the way they seem

We live our life for our gain

Never letting anyone in our lane

In the land of golden dreams


Heading out to the day

Maybe to change our ways

But always knowing--the sun is showing bright

'Cus in the land of golden dreams

Things aren't always the way they seem

We live our life for our gain

Never letting anyone-in our lane

In the land of golden dreams

In the land of golden dreams

I really want to work on a few songs--is there anyone interested? NEED HELP WITH GUITAR!

I decided to re-record an older song that I had--haven't posted it here before--just wanted to see what you guys thought--improvements etc...Obviously continues my trend of incredibly simple songs...anywho--let me know!